TTRPG Structural Audits
Many RPGs ship with rules that technically work but fail at the table: GMs get stuck, campaigns collapse, or the game rewards the opposite of what it promises. I audit RPG products before publication to identify these failures in advance: what’s missing, what’s assumed, and where the design doesn’t deliver on its claims. Measurable, evidence-based analysis—not subjective opinion.
See a Sample Structural Audit
A public example showing the Executive Verdict and Unified Synthesis from a full audit of Shadowrun, Fourth Edition.
What Structural Analysis Identifies
- Incentive misalignment: “Text promises ‘professional stealth gameplay,’ but mechanics allocate 32 pages to combat vs. 5 pages to social interaction. Design rewards confrontation, not subtlety”
- Onboarding barriers: “GM must absorb 250 pages across 4 fragmented chapters before running first session”
- Hidden market advantages: “Provides best-in-class security system simulation, a unique competitive position not advertised on the cover”
- Campaign viability limits: “The system sweet spot is 0-5000 XP; dice pool math breaks down beyond that threshold”
- Design identity clarity: “Tactical combat simulator dressed in a heist coat; mechanical depth serves a different playstyle than thematic pitch”
Findings are grounded in page counts, mechanical interactions, and documented procedures.
Ready to identify structural gaps before publication?
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How It Works
Choose the audit level that matches your needs:
- Diagnostic Audit: Answers one specific structural question ($250-300 | 2-3 days)
- Targeted Audit: Complete analysis of one section or subsystem ($600-800 | 5-7 days)
- Full Audit: Comprehensive product evaluation with market positioning verdict ($1,400-3,800 | 5-7 days)
All audits use the same 10-criterion framework. View full methodology
What You Receive
- Cross-validated findings: Structural patterns verified from multiple analytical perspectives, distinguishing high-confidence findings from interpretation-dependent observations
- Quantified metrics: Page counts, numeric breakpoints, time estimates, and resource allocations that make gaps measurable
- Documented evidence: Each finding marked with ✓ / ⚠ / ✗ / ? status and specific page citations
- Integrated analysis: How findings interact within subsystems (targeted audits) or across the full product (full audits)
- Market positioning verdict: Tier placement with confidence level (full audits only)
Who This Is For
- Designers who want to catch structural gaps before publication—not after reviews mention them
- Publishers evaluating whether a manuscript is structurally ready for production
- GMs deciding if a system’s design actually supports what the pitch promises
Logistics & Pricing
Delivery & Capacity
- 5-7 business day turnaround for most audits
- 2-3 audit slots available monthly
Beta Pricing (6 slots remaining through April 2026)
50% discount for beta participants who provide testimonials and allow anonymized
case study quotes.
- Diagnostic Audit: $250-300 (standard: $500-600)
- Targeted Audit: $600-800 (standard: $1,200-1,600)
- Full Audit (64-96pp): $1,400-1,800 (standard: $2,800-3,600)
- Full Audit (128-200pp): $2,200-3,000 (standard: $4,500-6,000)
- Full Audit (200-280pp): $2,800-3,800 (standard: $6,000-8,000)
- Full Audit (280+pp): Custom quote from $3,500 (standard: $6,500+)
Guarantees & Add-Ons
- Quality guarantee: 50% refund if no actionable gaps identified
- Confidentiality: All materials confidential unless you specify otherwise
- Comparative analysis add-on: Market positioning within broader RPG landscape (+$800-1,200)
Scope Clarifications
What structural audits don’t include:
- Playtesting, balance analysis, or number-crunching
- Feedback on story, theme, or setting quality
- Art, layout, or editorial review
- Ongoing design work, rewrites, or iterative consulting
How is this different from editing or playtesting?
- Developmental editors ($2,000-4,000) catch prose and pacing, not mechanical integrity or incentive structures
- Playtesters ($500-2,000) catch balance issues, not systematic subsystem gaps or onboarding friction
- Structural audits provide cross-validated findings with quantified metrics that make gaps measurable
Request an Audit
Email jjchastain@protonmail.com with:
- Product title and approximate page count
- Audit type (diagnostic, targeted, or full)
- Any specific structural concerns
I respond within 1-2 business days with pricing, availability, and next steps.
First-time clients: I’m happy to answer questions before you commit.